Whispers in the Walls

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Detective Sarah Reeves stepped out of her car, her eyes scanning the imposing facade of Blackwood Manor. The old Victorian house loomed against the darkening sky, its windows like vacant eyes staring down at her. Sarah smirked, shaking her head at her own fanciful thoughts. She’d investigated dozens of “haunted” locations in her career as a paranormal debunker, and this would be no different.

As she approached the front door, it swung open, revealing a nervous-looking man in his fifties. “Detective Reeves? I’m Harold Blackwood. Thank you for coming on such short notice.”

Sarah shook his hand firmly. “Mr. Blackwood. I understand you’ve had some… disturbances recently?”

Harold’s eyes darted around nervously. “Disturbances? That’s putting it mildly. Three deaths in the past month, all unexplained. The police are baffled, and the rumors… well, they’re not good for business.”

Sarah raised an eyebrow. “Business?”

“The manor’s been in my family for generations,” Harold explained as he led her inside. “We’ve been running it as a bed and breakfast for the past decade. But now, with these deaths and all the ghost stories…”

“I see,” Sarah nodded, her keen eyes taking in the ornate entryway. “Well, Mr. Blackwood, I can assure you that there’s always a logical explanation for these things. I’ll get to the bottom of it.”

As they walked through the house, Harold filled her in on the details of the deaths. An elderly guest had apparently fallen down the stairs, though there were no signs of a struggle. A young woman was found drowned in her bathtub, despite being an experienced swimmer. And most recently, a middle-aged man had seemingly suffocated in his sleep, with no medical explanation.

“And you’ve ruled out foul play?” Sarah asked, her detective instincts kicking in.

Harold nodded emphatically. “The police have been over this place with a fine-tooth comb. No evidence of any intruders or foul play. That’s when the ghost stories started…”

Sarah was about to respond when a sudden chill ran down her spine. She turned quickly, certain she’d seen movement out of the corner of her eye, but the hallway behind them was empty.

“Everything alright, Detective?” Harold asked, noticing her sudden tension.

Sarah shook it off. “Yes, fine. Just a draft, I’m sure. Now, show me where these incidents occurred.”

Over the next few hours, Sarah meticulously examined each location. She took measurements, checked for hidden passages or mechanisms, and set up various monitoring devices. As night fell, she prepared for her first overnight stay.

“Are you sure you’ll be alright alone?” Harold asked as he prepared to leave.

Sarah smiled reassuringly. “I’ve done this hundreds of times, Mr. Blackwood. I’ll be fine. We’ll get to the bottom of this, I promise.”

As the hours ticked by, Sarah reviewed her notes and monitored her equipment. Everything was quiet… too quiet. Even the usual creaks and settling noises of an old house seemed absent.

It was just past midnight when she heard it — a soft, melodic humming coming from somewhere upstairs. Sarah frowned, checking her equipment. None of her audio sensors had picked up anything.

Grabbing her flashlight, she made her way up the grand staircase. The humming grew louder as she approached the room where the elderly guest had died. Sarah’s heart raced as she pushed open the door.

The room was empty, but the humming continued. It seemed to be coming from everywhere and nowhere at once. “Hello?” Sarah called out, her voice steady despite her growing unease. “Is someone there?”

Suddenly, the temperature in the room plummeted. Sarah’s breath came out in visible puffs as she spun around, her flashlight beam cutting through the darkness. And then she saw it — a misty, translucent figure at the top of the stairs.

Sarah’s scientific mind raced to explain what she was seeing, but before she could process it, the figure turned and seemed to beckon to her before disappearing down the hallway.

Against her better judgment, Sarah followed. As she turned the corner, she found herself face to face with a solid wall where there should have been a corridor. “Impossible,” she muttered, running her hands over the wallpaper.

A child’s laughter echoed behind her, causing Sarah to whirl around. The hallway stretched out before her, impossibly long and dark. Portraits on the walls seemed to follow her with their eyes as she made her way back to the stairs.

As she reached the top step, Sarah felt a cold hand on her back. She turned, but there was nothing there. Suddenly, she lost her footing, tumbling down the stairs just as the elderly guest had done.

Sarah awoke with a start, finding herself back in the room she’d set up as her base. Her equipment blinked steadily, showing no abnormal readings. Had it all been a dream?

As she stood up, wincing at the very real bruises from her fall, Sarah noticed something on her notepad. In handwriting that wasn’t her own, a message was scrawled:

“Some mysteries are not meant to be solved. Leave now, or join us forever.”

Sarah felt a chill run down her spine as she realized the truth — for the first time in her career, she had encountered something she couldn’t explain. And as the sun began to rise over Blackwood Manor, Detective Sarah Reeves, the skeptic, the debunker, found herself believing in ghosts.

She packed her bags quickly, leaving a note for Harold Blackwood. It read simply: “Mr. Blackwood, I regret to inform you that I cannot continue this investigation. Some things are beyond our understanding. My advice? Close the manor. Some houses are not meant to be lived in.”

As Sarah drove away, she glanced in her rearview mirror. For a moment, she could have sworn she saw figures standing in the windows of Blackwood Manor, watching her leave. She pressed down on the accelerator, her world view forever changed by the whispers in the walls of that old, haunted house.

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Ismael S Rodriguez Jr (The Bulletproof Poet)
Ismael S Rodriguez Jr (The Bulletproof Poet)

Written by Ismael S Rodriguez Jr (The Bulletproof Poet)

I learn, create, and overcome. I write, paint, blog, and practice grey witchcraft. I served in the Navy and have schizophrenia and PTSD.

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